Thursday, March 3, 2016

Lollipop's


I love lollipops
How 'bout you?                                                                                     
You should love lollipops,
They're good for you!

 They come in all colors,
Bright, and pale too,
So I love lollipops,
How 'bout you?                                       

They come in all shapes,
Round, square,
And even a Q,
So I love lollipops,
So should you!

They come in all flavors,
Some sour, Some sweet,
I love lollipops,
And you love meat.

Now that I've told you,
What lollipops do,
I love lollipops,
Why don't you?
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8 comments:

  1. UnknownMarch 3, 2016 at 9:44 AM

    I really like your slice, nice rhyming!!!

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  2. UnknownMarch 3, 2016 at 10:14 AM

    I love the rhyming! This was a great idea!

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  3. UnknownMarch 3, 2016 at 2:01 PM

    I loved the creativity in your piece and I thought it was really good.

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  4. UnknownMarch 3, 2016 at 2:01 PM

    I loved the creativity in your piece and I thought it was really good.

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  5. UnknownMarch 3, 2016 at 2:21 PM

    Cool poem!! This was an awesome slice! I love lollipops too!

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  6. UnknownMarch 3, 2016 at 3:03 PM

    Lollipops are great, and I love your rhymes!

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  7. UnknownMarch 3, 2016 at 4:55 PM

    Great rhythm, and even better subject matter! Although that part about meat did come out of nowhere.

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  8. MaxsclassreadsMarch 3, 2016 at 8:57 PM

    Everyone already said the wonderful things I would say about your poem. The rhythm and rhyme are lovely and I like lollipops too!

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